The edifice

This is my first go at Friday Fictioneers – a 100 word flash fiction challenge based on a photo prompt. So here goes….

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Where had it come from? Grey haired Farmer Joe couldn’t explain. He spoke on local radio, broadcasting his confusion at the arrival of the edifice in his hay field. Crowds gathered by the unbroken fence, speculating, tweeting, poking selfie sticks through the wire.

Explanations ranged from military helicopters to alien transportation.

‘Where the heck had the blasted can come from?’ Joe’s question remained unanswered.

After several weeks, the journalists left, the cameras switched off, the tents folded up.

Then one day, a tornado ripped the giant cylinder up into the air; where it landed, nobody knows.

 

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19 comments

  1. keiths ramblings's avatar

    Great to see you you at FF! Love your story – I’d far rather it was a alien object than a boring old silo!
    Keith’s Ramblings

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thanks Keith, it would be more interesting! Although your silo has dark secrets.

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  2. Rosey Pinkerton's avatar

    I’m pretty sure it’s a rocket! I really enjoyed your take on prompt.
    Rosey Pinkerton

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      I love your upside rocket idea.
      thanks for stopping by.

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  3. Margaret's avatar

    I love a mystery. Great descriptions of the curious onlookers. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you. These days onlookers can do so much more than just look.

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  4. Lorna's Voice's avatar

    Great job! Welcome! I’m pretty new here, too. Fun, isn’t it. I love the mystery you create here. You are a natural. 🙂

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you. Might be beginner’s luck. See how I fair next week.

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      1. Lorna's Voice's avatar

        Nah, you’ve got a knack for this. 🙂

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  5. bykimberlylynne's avatar
    bykimberlylynne · · Reply

    Welcome! Nice first go. Selfie sticks and tweeting. Spot on,

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you!

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  6. OnChi's avatar

    One day, three years later, it came crashing back to earth! Nice story!

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      I ran out of words, but that would be an excellent finish.

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  7. The Writer's Village's avatar

    Round and round it goes, and where it stops nobody knows.

    The eventual loss of interest is so typically human.

    Randy

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Very true, even with modern technology, interest wanes quickly.

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  8. GHLearner's avatar
    gahlearner · · Reply

    Welcome, I haven’t been around for long either. I love this, that cylinder sure isn’t in Kansas any more.

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  9. Amy Reese's avatar

    Welcome to FF! What a great story. I loved your imaginative take and I was surprised at the end. Well done!

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  10. Ellespeth's avatar

    Just don’t follow up with it landing in my back yard 😛 Welcome to FF. Great start! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
    Ellespeth

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  11. rochellewisoff's avatar

    Dear Quiet Writer,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Imaginative story, well told. I look forward to reading more from you.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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