Unwanted Jetsam

I’m participating in Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers’ writing prompt. I’m certainly enjoying the challenge of putting together a 100 word story each week.

 

c-hase

“What is it? It’s huge.”

“An anchor chain.”

They’d been beachcombing, trekking across the cove for hours. “From a shipwreck?” Pascal poked a coal-black iron ring.

“Aye, which means…” He pushed Pascal down behind a rock. “There might be survivors.”

They peered around the boulder to the shoreline where the white crested waves crashed relentlessly in formation. Rising up, towering high until he blocked out the sun, a giant; his clothes were torn and his hair knotted about his weary face. He staggered, before collapsing onto the sand.

“Not again,” Pascal muttered. “We’ve only just got rid of Gulliver.”

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Jetsam – cargo deliberately thrown overboard to save a ship in trouble.

37 comments

  1. Lorna's Voice's avatar

    Perfect! I was kicking around the idea of Gulliver, but you beat me to it. Off to the thinking board… 😉

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Sorry! I’m sure you’ll find something else.

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      1. Lorna's Voice's avatar

        No need to apologize. I figured something else out. Posting it on Friday… 🙂

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  2. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar

    Ha, great last line – made me laugh.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thanks, it came to me in a flash 🙂

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  3. Carol J Forrester's avatar

    Brilliant ending. It really made me chuckle.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you. I couldn’t resist a little bit of humour

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  4. patrickprinsloo's avatar

    Lovely. Really took me by surprise. (Hope the giant is okay.)

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      I’m sure the giant would be taken care of… eventually 🙂

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  5. ansumani's avatar

    ha ha…Nice ending.

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  6. TraceyDelaplainMD.com's avatar

    Giants can be such a nuisance. ha ha
    Tracey

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      I know, littering the coast line!

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  7. GHLearner's avatar
    gahlearner · · Reply

    Hehe, great twist. Poor Liliputans, all these annoying giants.

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  8. Horus's avatar

    Beach combing in giant infested beaches are dangerous to health! The beach should have a warning sign !

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Agree, a special flag to denote the threat of unwanted giants.

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  9. Perry Block (@PerryBlock)'s avatar

    Nice twist. I’ve always wanted to be a Lilliputian!

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      It would be fun to see the world from a different perspective.

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  10. rochellewisoff's avatar

    Dear QW,

    Great twist of an ending.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you, Rochelle, it was photo that sparked the idea 🙂

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  11. Dave's avatar

    Swift had a thing for ships, makes perfect sense.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      That chain just looks huge and difficult to judge proportion. I love novels set on ships.

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  12. Snow's Fissures and Fractures's avatar

    Loved that last line! What a great story. 🙂

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  13. storydivamg's avatar

    Well-written story. I especially like that last line.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you, the last line was one of those flash inspiration moments, it wasn’t there when I started to write it.

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  14. The Writer's Village's avatar

    Bravo. That was great.
    I hate uninvited guests.
    Randy

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      So do I, especially when they’re bigger than you!

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  15. dmmacilroy's avatar

    Dear QW,

    A great tale with a giant ending. very cool and uniquely imaginative.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you, Doug.

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  16. Margaret's avatar

    Funny. At least they’ve had a practice with Gulliver – this giant should have an easier time with them. I loved it.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      You’d hope, but they struggled to keep Gulliver down!

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    micklively · · Reply

    Great sequel!

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      All I need now is a publisher 🙂

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  18. joseph elon lillie's avatar

    And I wonder how this one will turn out for the Lilliputians.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Hard work!

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  19. Ellespeth's avatar

    😛 Trumping Gulliver. Made me smile.
    Ellespeth

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