Stirring the emotions

Part of the joy of playing an instrument is the relationship you have with it. Learning one is a gateway to others.

This week’s flash fiction prompt hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.

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(c) Bjorn Rudberg

“Pluck don’t strum. Glide with the bow, don’t scrape.”

My cello lessons maintain the same awkward rhythm; the teacher’s bellicose voice is unchanged.

While I torment her, I eye the guitar propped against the wall. I’ve made a mistake. I chose poorly. It isn’t about what your hear, it’s how you feel, the stirring of emotions. I don’t get it with the cello. The connection isn’t there. I’m agitated, detached.

My fingers want to dance on the strings and slide between the frets.

“Mum,” I say, as she drives me home. “I don’t want to do this any more.”

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14 comments

  1. yarnspinnerr's avatar

    The musician behind the write communicates very well. Good write.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  2. keith's Ramblings's avatar

    Stick with it I say! Too many guitarists, too few cellists. The yoof of t’day!

    My little story is called The Orchestra

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      True, there aren’t enough celloists, and even few viola players. The guitar is a very versatile instrument for the yoof.

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  3. Iain Kelly's avatar

    Nice take. I agree with Keith, stick with the cello! 🙂

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Perhaps she should try both!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar

    Sometimes the grass is not greener on the other side… some exercise is needed.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Which ever she chooses, she’ll have to practise hard.

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  5. liz young's avatar

    Find another instrument, but don’t give up the music!

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      Absolutely. I tried out several before choosing the flute.

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  6. GHLearner's avatar
    gahlearner · · Reply

    Go with the guitar, by all means. A musician once said to me, once you find your instrument, you find your music. (I never did though, not looking very hard 😉 ). True feeling, well written.

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      An instrument becomes a companion for finding the music you enjoy playing, which can be different to what you enjoy listening to.

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  7. rochellewisoff's avatar

    Dear Rae,

    I hope Mum will listen and get the child guitar lessons instead. She’s obviously wasting her money and time. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. raesquiggles's avatar

      I’ve known many children pushed play an instrument, then give it up. It’s best to go with what the heart says.

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